CT Journal: Pick a section of dialogue from
"Oedipus Rex" - three to five interchanges - and type it out on your
paper.Then continue the dialogue on your own, moving the play in
another direction which you think represents an interesting
alternative scenario. You may wish shift the setting,or rename the
characters, but the new characters should in all psychological
respects resemble the characters in the original.
Oedipus: My children, generations of the living in the line of
Kadmos, nursed at his ancient hearth. . . I should be heartless were
I not moved to find you suppliant here.
Priest: Great Oedipus, O powerful king of Thebes!. . . Ships are only
hulls, citadels are nothing, when no life moves in the empty
passageways.
Oedipus: Poor children! You may be sure I know all that you longed
for in your coming here. . . Yet whenever he comes back, I should do
ill to scant whatever duty God reveals.
Brad: Eddie--we need your help! Larry broke his arm and now our
whole team is falling apart! Last week we lost to Waimanalo. It was
the first time in the history of community sandlot baseball that
Kailua lost to Waimanalo! Will you be our new pitcher?
Eddie: I would love to be the new pitcher! My family used to live in
Hawaii Kai and my brother, Nolan, was the pitcher for their team. He
has the all time strikeout record. My family moved here to Kailua so
that I wouldn't break his record. It is against family code to break
the record of a family member - everyone knows that!
Brad: Well than, that's all the better for us. It seems to me we've
got a new pitcher. Chris: [gazes into the distance] Hey guys,
here comes Creon back from the high school.
Eddie: What was he doing there?
Brad: He was asking the captain of their baseball team what we could
do to improve. The high school team hates it when we lose because all
those players used to play community sandlot. They like to give us
lots of advice.
Chris: [to Creon] Well, what did they say? What do we need to
do to get better?
Eddie: Yeah, what did they say? Whatever it is, I'll do it! I'll do
anything to beat Kaneohe next week.
Creon: They said that someone on our team must be breaking the family
code and that a team can't win if everyone isn't honest and fair.
Eddie: That's exactly what my brother told me! That's why I came here
to play sandlot. If I had stayed in Hawaii Kai, I would have run the
risk of breaking my brother's record - and family code.
Joe: Well, I guess all we can do for now is practice.
Eddie: Yeah, I guess so, but guys, if you know that you're the one
who is jinxing the team, then just tell us. We can figure something
out. But if you don't tell us--and we find out--then we're not going
to let you play ever again. Not even practice. Anyway, lets
practice!
[After practice everyone leaves except Joe and Eddie]
Joe: Hey Eddie--don't leave yet. I need to show you some things.
Eddie: All right--what's up?
Joe: Well, when Larry was the pitcher, we came up with some secret
tricks--just for the pitcher and the catcher. They are incredible.
Larry struck out so many guys using these tricks
[Joe shows Eddie some things with his hands and makes a couple of
throwing motions]
Joe: You get it?
Eddie: Yep I've got it.
Joe: Good. I'll see you tomorrow then.
Eddie: See Ya.
[At the game the next day, Eddie strikes out every single batter
from the other team. This scene takes place just after the
game.]
Joe: WOW! Great game, Eddie. You already broke Larry's record.
Eddie: [smiles]
Team: [chants] EDDIE, EDDIE, EDDIE
Aunt: Eddie? Eddie Rex? Is that you?
Eddie: Yes--yes, I'm Eddie Rex - but I don't think I know you.
Aunt: Oh, of course you don't remember me. It has been so long! I'm
your father's cousin. Sheesh - we haven't been in touch in so long!
[to Larry] Larry, Larry, come here.
Larry: [walks over oblivious to what is going on] Yeah mom?
What is it?
Joe: [to himself on the side] Uh-oh, I see what's going on.
This is no good. Uh-oh.
Aunt: Larry--this is Eddie, your second cousin! Look, he has already
met your friends.
Larry: [glares at Eddie] Yeah, and I have already met him.
He's the guy that pushed me down the stairs when I wouldn't let him
go down. It wasn't bad enough to just break my arm, he had to go and
break my record too. That's against family code.
Aunt: [not at all worried about any sandlot stuff like family
code] But Larry, you said it was a whole gang of high school guys
that broke your arm--and you never told me that you were purposely
blocking the stairs. What's going on young man?
Joe: [Butts in before aunt and Larry can continue. He is more
concerned with sandlot issues than Larry's issues] Nooo! Eddie!
We broke family code - and the pitcher/catcher pact! We're doomed. I
will never be able to show my face on the lot again. I can never play
baseball again. [Throws his catcher glove in the
dumpster.]
Eddie: I didn't know how terrible it was. I didn't know he was my
cousin! I didn't know that I was the one jinxing the team. I can't
play anymore. I can't even practice - and I put this fate all on
myself. [Throws his bat in the dumpster]
Setting: Asian Village at Punahou (The Asian Village is a group
that hangs out in front of the science center.)
Characters:
BRIAN: Messenger
QUEEN CHELSEA: Queen of the Asian Village (Iocaste)
JOLINE: Ordinary villager (Choragos)
RILEY: King of the Asian Village (Oedipus)
BEAU: Chelsea's Brother (Creon)
RYAN: Queen Chelsea's first husband, King before Riley took over,
Riley's father
JOLINE: So wait, tell what happened? Why all of a sudden is Queen
Chelsea dead? What's up with all this mad chaos going on?
BRIAN: It's crazy yo! I was walking around the Wind Tunnel and trying
to check out for all the freshmen girls, then all of a sudden I hear
all this kine screaming. So of course I go right. I follow it to the
girls' bathroom in Cooke. Kden, when I get there I see all of
Chelsea's good friends and they all crying and shit around her.
JOLINE: Serious?! What the hell?
BRIAN: Eh, you want me to finish the story or what? Sheesh.
JOLINE: Sorry man go on.
BRIAN: Ok, so I get to the bathroom and I ask what's going on and
this chick tells me that she saw Chelsea run into the bathroom
screaming and crying out that life wasn't worth living. Then this
chick tells me that she heard Chelsea crying out Ryan's name telling
him that she had married her own child. Riley is her own son and that
she had her child's children. Now how messed up is this? Geez, talk
about incest. Anyway, she hung herself in one of the stalls and the
chick that was telling me all this found her. So then Riley comes
running into the bathroom and sees Chelsea and goes all wacko. He too
starts to bawl like a baby and asks God why he would ever punish him
in such jack ass way. Now get this; he breaks off the toilet paper
dispenser off the stall's wall and plunges it into his eyes!
JOLINE: What the. . . ?
BRIAN: Yeah no joke brah. He's stabbing the damn toilet paper
dispenser in his eyes and he says something like, "What have I done?
Why have I been so blind and arrogant to see the chaos I have caused
within the Asian Village? I'm so sorry to the many people of the
village. I will blind myself so I won't have to see any more pain
that I have caused for all of you. Why? What have I done?!" Ho man,
it was scary.
JOLINE: Dude! What's gonna happen to him? Is he dead?
BRIAN: No, he's still alive. He requested the Asian Village warriors
to escort him by the rice fields in the village where everyone
gathers. He's gonna to tell the people that he killed his old man,
his mother, man and who knows how many others! Then he said he's
gonna leave the village and away from here so he won't cause any more
bad shit to happen. Hey Joline, look here he's coming out of the
bathroom now. Man I can't watch this, I'm gonna go look for more
freshmen.
[exit BRIAN, and RILEY enters]
RILEY: Sup guys?
JOLINE: Oh my god. Riley what do you think you're doing?
Self-mutilation is not the answer to anything! Look at you, you poor
thing.
RILEY: I don't want to see any more pain that I have caused. I'm in
way over my head man. This is not funny at all. Why must my faith be
like this? I'm better off dead. What have I done?
JOLINE: It's ok, you'll go on and tomorrow's another day. You can
start over.
RILEY: There is no starting over in my faith. AHHHHH! This SUCKS!
[Enter BEAU]
BEAU:
You! You killed my sister and her first husband man! All because you
are arrogant and
foolish. You were blind to the world. And because of your pity for
yourself you really
are blind now! You jackass! I will kill you because of what you have
done!
RILEY: I know I've been evil and blind. Are you retarded or
something? I've been yelling it and screaming it all today! Kill me
for all I care, I should die for what I've done.
BEAU: Fine then, die!
[BEAU throws a piece of bread at RILEY and all the mutant birds
around the science center come flocking to eat the bread. RILEY is
pecked to death my the man-eating mutant birds]
JOLINE: All this death! That the hell do you guys think you are
accomplishing?! Sheesh Beau I thought you were better than that!
[Exit JOLINE and BEAU, BRIAN comes back on and speaks toward the
audience]
BRIAN: Sup everybody? Man, that was some messed up stuff, yah? Well
the last word I heard was that Beau's going to be punished somehow
for killing Riley. Man, when's this shit gonna stop? I'm outta
here!